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by Ejio Tisco
Sun Apr 15, 2018 10:00 am
Forum: Abilities
Topic: Nava's Abilities
Replies: 4
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Re: Nava's Abilities

Wild Shape: Does she also gain the full physical statistics of whatever form she takes? If, for instance, she encountered an obnoxiously powerful and fast dragon, could she just spend a little MA to become physically OP?
I assume, but it should be stated, that she can morph back at will and at no cost (i.e. the cost is pre-loaded in the initial shapechange), though I'd like to know whether that also takes three seconds or not.
Exactly why can't she cast other spells in other forms?

Partial Wild Shape: No cost stated.

Entangling Vines: Cost is ambiguous; you list a range of variance, but neither the minimum, nor the maximum is stated.
Grammar: Pronoun difficulty. You use the generic "xir" for the less common expression of unknown sex, then switch to the more common "their" in the same sentence. It's fine to switch from sentence to sentence, but a single sentence should maintain one.
Punctuation: There should not be a period after "MA," and your usage of colons in succession is strange.

Aromatherapy: For the purple flower, is the disorienting effect damage to mental stamina? Power factor ambiguous.
Overall, this seems pretty weaksauce until Lv5, at which point it becomes a very cost-efficient Life spell.
Formatting and punctuation: There should be a space in "higherher" and between "minimal HE" and the following parenthesis, and the apostrophe on "it's" should be removed.

Vine Wall: I thought that you had given this a short duration. Maybe I just misread. In its current state, providing permanent terrain (though it currently lacks protection from the elements) in those proportions, it's too effective for its cost. It needs to be toned down.

Whispers on the Wind: What exactly are you looking for with this? Do you just want the non-player account to periodically post random messages to you? Seems like an excess of mod/admin workload unless you're okay with it not happening very often.
Grammar: The latter sentence is phrased as a fragment.

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