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by K
Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:45 pm
Forum: Character Adoption Center
Topic: Roxas No.XIII
Replies: 5
Views: 3932

Re: Roxas No.XIII

There; all done. I also took the topic icon out, since we'll be getting new ones, and I don't want the site to get confused with your post and mess it up or anything. Quite likely, nothing bad would happen, but I wouldn't want to take that chance, yanno'? Anywho, good job. We'll just go over the fixes for your stats, abilities, and anything that you want to change for your inventory, and you're looking great, man.
by K
Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:48 am
Forum: Character Adoption Center
Topic: Roxas No.XIII
Replies: 5
Views: 3932

Re: Roxas the Elementist

Very nice, man. This is great, really; it makes sense, it's unique enough, and all. The only other thing (which I forgot to say earlier, though it kinda' tied-in with the other things) is that there's no explanation as to how you got here. If you want, you don't have to specify it in your bio; you can in stead specify that in your first RP post. Oh, and there are still some English mistakes and the "Account name" part, the latter of which is just unnecessary, and the former of which is no big deal. Like I said, I can fix those for you, if you'd like.
by K
Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:54 pm
Forum: Character Adoption Center
Topic: Roxas No.XIII
Replies: 5
Views: 3932

Re: Roxas the Hell Demon

1) I suggest that you read the "Angel/Demon/Whatever Characters" thread, because it doesn't really make sense for a) a demon to love, b) a demon to mate and impregnate, c) a half-demon to be born, d) anything that's demonic to be good in any way, shape, or form, e) I could go on... >>
Besides, it's also all so unoriginal... I mean, it gets old to see, "I'm an angel!", "I'm a demon!", "I'm a half-demon!", "I'm a fallen angel!", and all the others on 100 out of 99 characters. Don't look at me in that tone of smell.
2) If you'd like, I can fix that image code for you. You simply forgot the .jpg, but I can edit that in for you, and I'll just take "The Character" out, since it's rather obvious, as well as the account name part, all right? ^_^ While I'm at it, would you like me to make some English corrections? I must say that your English has gotten better; there are only a few mistakes in there.
3) It's "Houcm", not "Holcum". I think that the latter name is already taken, not that it much matters. Hmm...

Otherwise, nice job, man. Welcome to Sein.

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