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by Dycedarg
Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:27 am
Forum: Character Bios
Topic: Banished Hybrid
Replies: 10
Views: 6719

Re: Banished Hybrid

1) Exactly how was she made?
2) How about you use color codes or something to show who's speaking at which parts? xD
by Dycedarg
Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:02 am
Forum: Character Bios
Topic: Banished Hybrid
Replies: 10
Views: 6719

Re: Banished Hybrid

Okay, let me know when you have. ^^

Aha. Odd way to do a bio, but okay. xD
by Dycedarg
Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:11 pm
Forum: Character Bios
Topic: Banished Hybrid
Replies: 10
Views: 6719

Re: Banished Hybrid

Lol, that's not a Mary Sue . . . The whole part about seducing whoever she wants is just what many Mary Sues do, but a Mary Sue is an idealistic representation of yourself. Unless you want to be an ariheaded, female, slutty, sadistic, bitchy, manufactured vamp-lilith, she's not a Mary Sue. XD
Anyway, you should specify when(-ish) she was supposedly made, as well as how. Also, being sent here by "a means of both technology and magic" is not specific at all.
Oh, and lust isn't the mind's only weakness, you know?

Then, how do people know that she controls wildlife? xD

Oh, boy . . . This should be good. XD

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