Shelby's abilities

[Shelby]

fly: it's exactly what it sounds like. I can flap my wings and fly, pretty simple. Only problem is, by myself with no extra weight I can hardly fly a mile and a half. With weigth, maybe 30 feet. I'm pretty weak, and flying is hard. I have light bones, so...can't carry too much. I much perfer to glide. Gliding is easier and I can go further. The farthest on one flight was 3 miles, the wind was good but I got hungry and had to find something to eat...

for now, that's all I can do. I don't have a weapon and have always flew away when there was danger.
I can punch though! really hard too! and slap, and pinch....and kick...but nothing special. ^^
with no powers, I got nothing.

[K]

Stats.

[Shelby]

Strength: a little below average
Mana: a little above average
intelligence: a little above average
speed: normal
resistance: a little below average

is that okay?

[K]

Um, no... You left out most of the stats... See that PM that I just sent you? Ignore that. I had forgotten that you hadn't written stats up... You have chakra, unless you're going to make some rule up about how your brand of angels don't have chakra, you certainly have health energy, physical stamina, defense, and magic (Even if you don't know any magic, it's how strong your spells would be if you did know them.). By "intelligence", you mean "mental stamina"? You know how these go, love; please make them fit... On the plus side, what you did write is at least balanced.

[Shelby]

Strength: below average (dude, no powers, no muscules)
Mana: a little above average
intelligence (mental stamina): a little above average
speed: normal
defense: a little below average
chakra: normal
health energy: above average (hey, I fly alot. I'm kinda fit.)
physical stamina: normal

[K]

Flying a lot would improve physical stamina, not health energy, but okay... You're still missing magic, and you're now missing resistence... You don't have to organize things into the normal order, although it makes things easier, but you do have to state each stat.

[Shelby]

*sighs* would you write them down in noraml order? I went to other posts and the abilities are not there like thy used to be. I for get them. But I'll edit mine again, and if it's not satisfacory this time, please post the order I'm supposed to fill out.
Strength: below average (dude, no powers, no muscules)
Mana: a little above average
intelligence (mental stamina): a little above average
speed: normal
defense: a little below average
chakra: normal
health energy: normal
physical stamina: above average (hey, I fly alot. I'm kinda fit.)
magic: Normal
resistence: normal

[K]

Um... Yeah, they are... Example: Noah
Physical Stamina
Mental Stamina
Health Energy
Mana
Chakra
Strength
Defense
Magic
Resistence
Speed

SPD is often placed above STR, which is fine, as there is no specific order, but that's the format that people tend to follow just to keep things organized.

This is better, but you're now a bit below average, as shown here:
+ above, a little above, a little above
- below, a little below

See, if you narrow one of the "little above"s down to average, "above" down to "a little above", an "average" down to a "little below", a "little below" to "below", or otherwise reduce things just slightly, you'll be fine.