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Post by Alieth » Mon May 16, 2011 11:53 am

Name: Tsoyoi-so
Aliases: Alieth
Age: Around 750
Race: Kulazian
Sex: Female
Birthplace: Begonia 2
Height: 8 Foot 4 Inches
Weight: 310 Pounds
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Skin Tone: Pale Causasian with yellowing.

Personality. Alieth has a very strong sexual desire. As being a virgin for 750 plus years she desires nothing more than to mate, but in unable to do so else she kills anyone that mates with her due to her strong sexual pleasure and desires. She tends to flirt a lot and often wears skimpy clothes to show off her generally oversized bust and bum. She is also manly in ways and is not afraid to show off her stuff.

Personal History:

Tsoyoi-so was born on a hot and arid day on a giant terrestrial world known as Begonia 2, Begonia 2 was dying world as for thousands of years a rare crystal was mined that powered all the weapons and devices used by the people of Begonia 2. Because the crystal mined from the world were the life force of the planet itself the planet soon began to fade a whither away getting hotter and harder to live in by the day. Tsoyoi-so's parents afraid of their only child dying spent what money they had left on a Capsule and sent Tsoyoi-so in hypersleep out into the vast reaches of space to find a new place to live. As the capsule she was in detected a place to live it crashed onto this small rocky and green world and out came Tsoyoi-so. Luckily a alien of the world she crashed on happed to spot her capsule crashing and came to her aid. The capsule had landed north of a russian settlement, in a small town. Earth was now her new home.

After finding her the man and woman would keep Tsoyoi-so and rename her Alieth. Unaware of her past they would raise her as a normal girl. As Alieth grew she indeed grew, at age 17 she was nearly 2 feet taller than most girls but still retained normal bodily proportions. Alieth would one day surrounded by some men demanding Alieth perform acts of a sexual nature for them. Getting angry Alieth's body woud for the first time flare up in a red aura and the men would both be crushed by an overwhelming and utterly sheer force. Alieth would wait in a pool of blood for 3 days before she would leave. Still horrified by her own actions she would run away from home and spend the next 2 years searching for something new. As Alieth spent years traveling around Asian she would notice that her body never got older, never got hurt and never felt pain. She now knew something was different. At this point she also felt a strong sensation within her body that was telling her to mate.

As a hundred years passed Alieth would watch cities and towns grow, she would watch Earth's people scurry about as money became more and more important. Alieth would for the first time find love in a small Dutch settlement. Here she would tract the attention of her love using her perfectly shaped body with unnaturally large breasts. They would both be ready to begin sexual intercoarse. When the man began to insert into Alieth a strong sensation would overtake Alieth activating yet another unknown power, this power would cripple the mind of the man and kill him. She would spend a night with him crying before she ran off extremely depressed. She would head back to the small town in Russia and find her Capsule, upon examining it she would uncover a video from her true parents telling Alieth whom Alieth was, a Kulazian from a world where the government has destroyed the planet from greed. They wished her a good new life and the message would end.

A small box would open up wielding a foot long and 3 inch thick key. The key would have a note attached to it listing Alieth's abilities that she could learn two of such she already displayed. The final instruction told her of a blade that could only be unlocked if this very key were used to break the virginity of Alieth. Alieth would do as it said and her screams would be heard echoing through the russian hills. As her own blood poured over the seal that locked her blade within, the seal would activate and directly in front of her a sword would form floating in the sky. Its splendor and glory only known to alieth. With blood now on the sword the blade would speak to her. "OH YEAH! A fresh virgin Kulazian, what could be better". Alieth would scold the blade before the blade would take the form of a small dragon and lick the blood and juices from her inner thigh. Claiming that he had been locked up for ten thousand years the dragon seemed overjoyed to see a Naked alieth standing there and because of this the dragon would revert to sword form and grant alieth full use of itself. The dragon would then tell Alieth that anyone she tried to sleep with would die unless they possessed a mind that could handle a Kulazian's sexual pleasure and desire.

The dragon would then spend the next 545 years training and teaching Alieth in the art of swordmanship. This is when Alieth would find her second love interest a General in the Earth Alliance Navy known as William Sywyk, she would touch this mans shoulder and find that he had what it takes to stay alive if she were to mate with him. Alieth would spend the next few hundred years trying to get this immortal mans attention in many sexualized ways. Alieth would join the navy and gain the rank of Captain in 2563 where she was given command of the Ship the Faith of Heart. She still up to this day tries to seduce William into loving her.

One day while traveling in her ship she would wind up in Houcm vie a strange anomaly.

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Post by Choh Lehko » Mon May 16, 2011 12:02 pm

Here we go, again...
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Post by Alieth » Mon May 16, 2011 1:01 pm

Is that the only comment, I'm only gonna use Faith and Alieth. Once the General and Revil's current threads are done they are done.

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Post by K » Mon May 23, 2011 7:53 pm

I put this here mainly because it goes with the other threads of this guy that I'm about to move here. The whole purpose of these threads is to show people BAD examples. That is to say that Bill was able to do some things correctly, but his threads show a clear lack of effective organization, it is evident that he didn't put much effort into making sense, and he put tons of effort into getting across what he wanted, i.e. the history of his characters that no one cares about and the godhacks. When making a character, be sure that you're not just ripping off the majority of sci-fi films, Gundam, DBZ, and whatever else. Make your character really something that deviates to your tastes, your style, your preferences, and your ideas, not just cheap knock-offs. That being said, don't be so obsessive with your characters; they're just characters. They're not real people, and even if they represent a part of you, they're not you. If you had a storyline pre-planned, even if you wrote a whole book on it, don't be afraid to walk away from it. Your story on Sein is subject to how others interact with you, not just what you write, which is why it's so fun. If you're just looking to write a story on your own, go write it on your own (You can do that in Spam or Artisan's Alley, if you want.), but if we tell you that some of your character details need revision (i.e. "You can't have an infinite energy source," "You have to explain how the special gun works," "You can't have infinite ammo with everything that you do," "You can't just pull some trail mix out of nowhere for a snack if you didn't actually have it beforehand," et cetera), just revise them for the site. We're reasonable; we allow you to convey the themes that you want to convey, and we give you a ton of freedom. Just don't get so caught-up in your original designs that you can't make your characters fair.
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