Seinvocc

Thanks man you really didnt have to edit the first paragraph now i feel like a slaking :P i will get to those errors after i read the next to reviews and no i dont want to it's better to leave out where he is from.... for now at least.

-/Abilities File .01: Confessions of the Machination.\- "Suit Listed abilities stated below. It appears that the suit has taken a DNA sample from skin and blood the minute it was put on, this proves not to be a problem since this is now recognized as my suit and no one else may be able to use it. Th...

About the whole naming thing, the Fortune Teller suggested a name but I believe if you disagreed with it you were able to name it yourself, if not and I'm thinking of another installment of said series forgive me :D And how would we acquire the animals and how will the animal parts be randomly selec...

-/Armor File 52-Zeta\- REBIRTH: "The restart of organic life that will revolutionize the way our military and mining skills change. It will be the ultimate piece of equipment that can lead life into a new direction... That is until HE got his hands on it." -Cervantes the Armorer REBIRTH is unlike an...

Aye you're a great teacher :D

ah ok that does make sense but even though i will edit it, most people would make sense of it still. I'm gunna check the spelling and adding of other words to make it more sensible and check punctuation and such.

umm mumm mum i had re-read everything thrice and made the edits to the grammar mistakes and made the bio make more sense

-/Data File- 1200001910-9\- Archived Name: Moribito von Laurel (solved as unofficial last name; actual full name has yet to be identified) Gender: Male Alias: Zephyr Age: Somewhere between the ages of 15-17 Relatives: unt who lies on the edge of the Endzone, father and mother suspected of dying afte...