Seinvocc

Thanks man you really didnt have to edit the first paragraph now i feel like a slaking :P i will get to those errors after i read the next to reviews and no i dont want to it's better to leave out where he is from.... for now at least.

Aye you're a great teacher :D

ah ok that does make sense but even though i will edit it, most people would make sense of it still. I'm gunna check the spelling and adding of other words to make it more sensible and check punctuation and such.

umm mumm mum i had re-read everything thrice and made the edits to the grammar mistakes and made the bio make more sense

-/Data File- 1200001910-9\-

Archived Name: Moribito von Laurel (solved as unofficial last name; actual full name has yet to be identified)
Gender: Male
Alias: Zephyr
Age: Somewhere between the ages of 15-17
Relatives: unt who lies on the edge of the Endzone, father and mother suspected of dying after the creation of the Endzone
Appearance: UNKNOWN. His last known appearance update stated him as a male around the height of 5'6" with sky blue hair with silver highlights. Noticeable facial features are a somewhat permanent scowl, grey eyes, and the eye formation of a hawk. Moribito has also been rumored to have fangs.

-/Biography\-

At the moment, it is unclear who or what Moribito is; he's taken his last name from his aunt who raised him for a time after his parents were pronounced dead after the creation of the Endzone. Over the years, he has been somewhat of an enigma, for it wasn't until recently that his entire medical history was discovered to be a fraud since the time at which he was five until today. Moribito soon became a threat to the people of Revolt City after he acquired an interesting piece of equipment known as the REBIRTH, a high military, advance suit of armor that covers the body from head to toe and is made out of some of the best metals on our planet. It's well-made, causing bullets of up to .44 from his home world to barely scratch the surface. Mori is fast and exceedingly dangerous at close combat, as his suit provides him with heightened mobility, heightened hand-eye coordination, and better reflexes. It is stated the he has never been seen out of the armor, and was hinted by his aunt that, even without the armor, Moribito still poses a threat to those who wish to combat him. It is unclear whether or not his aunt has fought, trained, or seen him without the suit of armor fighting against other opponents. Currently, Moribito has gone missing after committing a series of robberies on the military scale, as well as systematically destroying businesses of powerful, wealthy politicians and important military personnel.

For now it still a great mystery how Moribito obtained a suit of great ability and power. It his hinted he's working with a mysterious splinter group who has risen the crime rate at an exponential pace, what is it he seeks to obtain is unknown as no one has ever talked to him or even had relative contact with the strange male. Getting answers out of his aunt has come in repeated failures as she constantly goes into hiding whenever the need arises. Apprehension of Moribito was close at hand until his Aunt displayed an unknown amount of magical and physical skill and defeated the NASF team sent after him. Moribito finally showed himself after a gruesome fight with the chairman of a powerful space organization program, it was there NASF was sent again to apprehend his and much to their dismay, Moribito was able to beat and execute the commanding 1st General of the NASF on national television. After years of plotting and triangulating, it was shown Moribito had no where else to run and was cornered once again by the NASF, he foiled their apprehending attempt as he used the REBIRTH mobile systems to get himself a great deal of speed to go through what looked like a dimensional rift that sent him to an unknown world. We're currently figuring of a way to get to the world and find Moribito, this task will come to realization soon after eight months time.