Arts of Terah

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Re: Arts of Terah

Post by Terah » Fri May 27, 2011 2:47 pm

Edited I changed the Raki Suta to a drop increaser only.
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Post by Choh Lehko » Fri May 27, 2011 3:44 pm

Okay, that works better. I'd like it if you toned down those percentages for now, though; for a mere 14% or your original mana, you have a LOT of rare drop potential. It wouldn't take much for you to, especially with your STR, weaken a group of enemies to the point at which you can one-shot them, cast this once, and hack them all down for a boatload of rare drops, and all at a fairly small mana cost. Add an ability to gain mana as you deal physical damage, add an ability to gain mana with each enemy that you drop, and throw in something like an ability to cut the mana cost in half or increase your mana recovery rate, and you've got an uber-cheap farming technique before Lv4. At least for now, I'd like the percentage chances to be reduced somewhat.
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Post by Terah » Fri May 27, 2011 8:37 pm

Changed it
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Post by Choh Lehko » Mon May 30, 2011 1:46 am

Okay, now make an edit to clearly state that the percentages are out of your original mana, so that when you're at Level, say, 4, a 6% cost will only cost 3% of the mana that you'll have at that point. That is, unless you actually want all your costs to be proportional.
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Post by Terah » Mon May 30, 2011 1:49 am

An edit to which one? or do you mean overall?
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Post by Choh Lehko » Mon May 30, 2011 2:04 am

Yes, the main post. The first post of a character info list is what is generally considered for approval, unless one breaks multiple sets of abilities into multiple posts.
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Post by Terah » Mon May 30, 2011 2:24 am

All costs are out of the original mana.

I simply added this to the part about percentages.
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Post by Silver Fenrir » Mon May 30, 2011 3:12 am

Temporary approval granted
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Post by Terah » Mon May 30, 2011 3:14 am

Thanks again.
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Post by Tixxi Eldixac » Wed Aug 24, 2011 3:26 pm

I just noticed something. Does the Sengekyou Tenkyoken spend 7/8ths of your MA or 90% of your original MA? Also, what is this "magical damage with a metaphysical property" shit? You must have explained metaphysical attacks to your couzin. Metaphysical properties have NOTHING to do with damage being spread. That's just a very common property of metaphysical attacks and a vastly common property of magical attacks. "Metaphysical property" =/= damage spread. No. A metaphysical attack is one with- Go read the guide that I made, for crying out loud. -_-
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Post by Tixxi Eldixac » Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:40 pm

Very well. Temporary approval restored.
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Post by Choh Lehko » Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:18 am

Wait. Now, you changed it to say that it deals magical damage, but is a physical attack. It's clearly a magical attack. Take that part out. -_-

"a sonic boom like shock wave of mana" should be "a sonic boom-like shockwave of magic." You don't expel mana; you expel magic. Mana is what you spend.

There are some other things in there that either don't need to be said (like the last sentence of Advanced Slash), a lot of unnecessary capitalization (Elementless Magic, for instance), and plenty more spelling and punctuation errors that make this difficult to read, so if you'd bother to go through and do some proofreading that your couzin was too lazy to do, that'd be appreciated...
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