Waking up wet

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Re: Waking up wet

Post by NPA » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:52 pm

Clarise set the plate down.

"Oh, it's basically just an overseized praying mantis. Tougher and stronger than you'd think, but not so bad."

She proceeded to fill her own bowl with stew.

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Post by Alexsys » Sat Nov 20, 2010 3:37 pm

"A gaint Praying mantis...they have those here!!"She filled her bowl too trying not to look scared and show that she was scared of a gaint praying mantis
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Post by NPA » Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:21 pm

Clarise proceeded to pile some garlic crab salad onto her plate with some of the killer mantis steak.

"Not here, silly! They're all over the Void Meadow, Lunabell Fields, Crash Pastures, Mistvalley Lake, and some variations are in the Mythic Thicket. I heard rumors of some kind being in the Necrohol of Rodentia, there's a snowy kind on the Jden Sol Snowcaps, and I heard of a mountainous offshoot in the Flint Ranges and Academy Path. I don't know if there are any more, but- Oh, where would you like to sit, darling? -those from the nearby fields are tasty." ^^

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Post by Alexsys » Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:28 pm

Standing there with a really confused look on her face and takes a seat in a random chair near her.

"...."
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Post by NPA » Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:36 pm

"Something the matter, Alexsys?"

She sat on the couch and put her food on the coffee table.

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Post by Alexsys » Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:38 pm

"It's just...i have no idea where i am and any of the places that you're talking about?"Eats some of her food.
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Post by NPA » Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:21 pm

((In the future, please use complete sentences; incomplete sentences like that leave a lot of room for confusion. I do the same thing in Y!M, but, when on a forum, complete sentences are much nicer. ^_^))

"You . . . don't know any of them? This is the Shallows Village; where have you been?"

She sipped some of her stew. Ooh, nice and hot.

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Post by Alexsys » Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:06 am

(That is a complete sentence?)

"I just woke up here"Blows on her food to cool it down a little.

"I don't know how i got here all that i do know is that i woke up here and everything i was carrying is all that i have"She blew on it some more. "I live in Twilight Town if you know that place and i think this is a far away place from there"
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Post by NPA » Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:28 am

(("Eats some of her food." <- That one. It's incomplete because it's only a predicate; you need a subject and a predicate for a complete sentence. For instance, "She started to eat some of Clarise's food," or "Alexsys started to eat some of her food." See what I mean? ^_^))

"Hrm . . . Well, I've never heard of a Twilight Town . . . Oh, you must be from a different universe! This is the planet Houcm, in the Houcm Universe, of the dimension of Seinvocc. Does any of that sound familiar to you?"

She took a bite of her salad, which was as good as it sounded and moreso.

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Post by Alexsys » Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:34 am

She looked confused again.

"No sorry...i've never heard of Seinvocc or Houcm universe? But i was able to travel to diffrent worlds? So i thought this was just another world but it's another universe?"She looks up at the ceiling like she was trying to stare past the roof and try to find her world.
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Post by NPA » Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:40 am

"Huh . . . Well, um, how did you travel between worlds? Perhaps a portal appeared right in front of you as you were flying through space or something?"

She kept munching the salad. Damn, garlic crab salad is good . . .

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Post by Alexsys » Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:46 am

"The last thing that i remember is walking into my closet? So i dont think a portal opened?"She took another bite of her food and mmmdd. "Mmm this is good food!"She smiled and kept eating.
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Post by NPA » Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:01 am

"That's strange, and thank you; it's made frm the freshest ingredients, of course." ^^

She took another bite before continuing.

"Well, welcome to Houcm, Seinvocc, then. I hope that you like wherever you go, and I hope that you are always safe and happy." ^^

Aww, she was so sweet. She realized that she had forgotten the knives, so she put her fork down and went over to the kitchen to grab some knives for the steaks.

"Oh, and I hope that you try the mantis steak; it's much better than you'd expect, for something that came from a bug, heehee!" xD

Not a convincing argument, but a humorous and well-intended one, anyway.

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Post by Alexsys » Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:10 am

She stared at the steaks then at clairese. "Umm no thanks i got full on this"To be truthful she just didn't want to eat a bug.

"And thank you for welcoming me here i do have to ask though...you said that this isn't the only place here right you said there's other places too?"She finished eating her food and she placed the bowl on her table.
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Post by NPA » Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:29 am

"Aww, but it's not like most bugs. Well, I won't make you eat it; I just really think that you should try it."

She sat down and cut a bite off her steak.

"Yeah, there are plenty of regions of this planet. You wanna' just try a bite of mine?" ^^

She held her fork out with a small bite of the steak for Alexsys to taste test it.

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